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its really intense and atmospheric. can imagine being lost in another world, unable to get back.

good job dude

What a song! I have visions of a guy sitting there starring at the wall with these sounds carrying on and on. Such a vivid and awsum use of instruments to convey emotion. Love it!

there is a lot of mixes in here. the intro feels a bit too dragged out with the beat throwing the timing off. the melody that goes with the beat should probably enter at the same time to solidify the sound. I like, however the riff of the intro, its very iconic and is great.

when the intro just disappears it feels it should fade and is too abrupt, same with the riff after it. when it comes back it feels out of place and generally feels like everything is just chopping into place with no coherence. I would suggest maybe have one riff predominately throughout and have the others fading in and out or visa versa.

the guitar is very loud and off putting to the timing and other instruments. it doesn't compliment anything. the notes are good but it needs to be blended a lot better.

the beat keeps entering and disappearing again which is very off putting. i would suggest following or setting a structure and sticking to it, having two conflicting instruments or rhythms having their own individual play time and having them combine at the end i personally think would flow a lot better.

I don't like writing bad reviews and i don't feel this is a bad song, it just needs some work. its a great start point and i would to hear how it turns out after it has been fixed.

Keep at it buddy :-)

Mrobeymenow responds:

Hey that's some really good advice. I don't feel bad at all, I appreciate that people like you would like to help me. I'll try to use your advice as best I can.

this is expertly done, its a great build and flows brilliantly. Definitely great to listen to when jogging!

Awsum uplifting use of melodies and beat! it works better as a celebration song and congrats on the new job!

amazing use of atmosphere and instruments, well done :-)

DanJohansen responds:

Thanks Rain! Glad you enjoyed it!

it reminds me of the shinra mission from FF7, amazing work!

LloydeSorrow responds:

Thank you so much! :-)

Awsum, i love it!

LloydeSorrow responds:

Thanks! :D

professional work, i love the build and the constant fight of the melodies throughout. Awesum!

FateModified responds:

Hey, thanks! It's funny though that you say you like the way the melodies fight. Usually melodies are supposed to work together - you know, like a team effort! Haha, I know what you mean though, thanks!

incredible work, such a beautiful collaboration of instruments. i love it!

Emid responds:

Thank you. Really glad you enjoyed it.

My aim is to write video game soundtracks and themes for web comics alike. I have been playing guitar for about 13 years and have recently put my hand to electronic sounds. Here are some of the sites I am on https://www.facebook.com/sharprainmusicuk ht

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