Masterful work, the subtle ambient textures are really inspiring. it sounds something straight out of a legend of zelda game. your students are very lucky :-)
Masterful work, the subtle ambient textures are really inspiring. it sounds something straight out of a legend of zelda game. your students are very lucky :-)
I'm a blessed man. Thanks for listening to the song!
the melody is great, the bass is epic at the start. the build is good, the piano is a good breakup to the hook.
it sounds like an epic side scroll-er music. the break down is flawless. you have a good mind for keeping the song going.
at the end i feel it does get a little too complex, like there is too much going on, maybe a more memorable and simple hook played at the end ready for loop to start over?
Thanks, it's really encouraging to me that you think I "have a good mind for keeping the song going." When I start a song, it's usually just repetitive stuff, and so that is part of the challenge to make it interesting all the way throughout so the listener doesn't get bored. I'm glad you think I succeed in that with this song :D
Sometimes though, I can get a bit carried away with trying to keep the song interesting and I end up adding too many tracks in a section that can make it overly complex and detracting from the main melody. That's something I have to work on. I'll keep this in mind when I work on an improved version of this song. Thanks for your comments!
again, loved the earlier one and this is a clear progress from that.
i believe you are too harsh in your own analysis, it a very solid song with a professional sound and feel.
i love the progression of the drums and how it builds and drops to create tension.
the transition at around the 1:07 mark is a little abrupt, maybe a spot for vocals? or a quick burst of a reverse section of the song ready to go into that beat and back to the main hook?
its hard to find faults with it to be honest.
great job :-D
Thank you, I'm glad you like the sound of it. I'm not sure if that's because of the higher uploaded quality or the mixing, but it's got to be a good thing. I think I will make a version with vocals one day, what the track was designed to hold was a more literal song.
what a mix of instruments and melodies! its sounds completely professional!
Congrats, can see this being used very easily.
Wow, thanks! I'm honored that you think it sounds so professional. I started using GarageBand a few months ago, but I really want to move on up to a more professional DAW such as FLStudio for more instruments and more control over the sound. GarageBand is awesome for beginners, but I want to do much more. Thanks for the feedback!
The moment the countdown started i knew it was going to be good.
the intro is a little rough to get through but the pay off is worth it. the intro does feel a tad bit off timing in places but i couldnt think of anything improvements than what it is at the moment.
the rest of the song is strong, fluid and relentless. the mix is professional and that beat....oh my that beat! great great stuff!
VIRTUAL REALITY! *Raves*
WOW! Thanks a lot. 5* is more than even I would have given it now.
Couldn't agree more with the rough intro, it was actually salvaged from a track that is now gone, but there's no excuse for me not at least mastering it differently.
I'm glad you enjoyed the beat as well; Before I started casually producing and was into rock I thought I'd be a drummer, but after a few times and trying to learn beats I decided it wasn't for me.
you have such a great grasp of timings, i cant fault your songs for ever being boring, there is just too much to listen to.
1.20-ish is my favorite part, it drops and raises again with such subtle force it got me hyped up!
Great Job
I had responded but it vanished, so thank you for the niceties and I'm glad you like the slow trance part, I worked on the mastering quite a bit there.
Wow, your talent never ceases to amaze me. good job!!
:) Oh, thanks a lot!
My aim is to write video game soundtracks and themes for web comics alike. I have been playing guitar for about 13 years and have recently put my hand to electronic sounds. Here are some of the sites I am on https://www.facebook.com/sharprainmusicuk ht
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